My youngest son ("Kahoa") just started written narrations this term. This is his first one, he wrote it last month, when he was nine. I asked him if it would be okay to post it here and he chose the one he thought was his best one. The last sentence is in my own handwriting, he had asked me to add that. And this was from a period where he had just seen a Veggie Tales video and was apparently very impressed by it. ;) He signed all of his schoolwork "Larry Boy" for a couple of weeks.
This is from A Child's History of the World by Virgil Hillyer, the chapter about "John Whom Nobody Loved."
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John was bad and no one like'd him. One time John wantid a frend to be a bishop but the Pope saed that he did'nt want him to be and said that he would close all the churchis. So John chos his frend and the Pope did what he said. Now the people hateid John and John was scard. The Baron put John in prison. John was unwillingly made to sign the Magna Carta by the Baron.
the end
by Larry Boy!
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